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Sleepless Bonk
1491 points
1521 Comment(s)
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Sleepless Bonk HateMe - 1725789212
🐻 with it :]also rather than doing a complaint here, it would be more efficient to go directly to the TL or even author if it's the author that's doing it
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Sleepless Bonk - 1725780954
izana took his schizophrenia pills
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Sleepless Bonk - 1725779386
usually epilogues entail their future and the problems are already solved in the main story...
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Sleepless Bonk - 1725778934
story wise this is a really refreshing take for the novel to reality trope, though it's not so different than the others. great potential but was rushed making it feel a bit shallow, i.e. the first part of the story when izana and ginger was bonding could be a bit longer, it feels unnatural that izana suddenly trusted ginger just because she knows about his secret. also there was little sense of time here, everything just suddenly came to be, author didn't really imply timings in the story except for flashbacks and prior incidents. 7/10 overall, still a good story and a refreshing mc
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Sleepless Bonk - 1725752949
this part feels a bit shallow, like rushed
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Sleepless Bonk - 1725752567
izana didn't even have a fall animation, he just laid flat on the ground the next scene 😭😭, also what is that Disney princess cliche 😭😭😭😭
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Sleepless Bonk - 1725752158
that... kinda works in ginger's favour... right? trains izana to not rely on his powers and.. maybe.. 😉😉
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Sleepless Bonk - 1725751576
she.. seems to be in a delusion of some sorts, because no matter what happens, she seems to still believed that izana will come to like her
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Sleepless Bonk - 1725751277
well one of them is getting executed, or maybe both lol
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Sleepless Bonk - 1725749664
so izana > ginger, ginger > izana, Hamel > ginger, red hair bitch > izana...
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Sleepless Bonk - 1725749372
the portrait was shown off the wall in an earlier chapter, and since nobody found out abt the safe in a while, did the flashback happen earlier? before gesuit made the wall safe?
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Sleepless Bonk - 1725749070
that... actually went better than I thought, Hamel I'm very sorry, I judged you too soon and izana being a good sport was really great too, they both also acknowledge the feelings they had for ginger
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Sleepless Bonk - 1725748454
I've come to noticed more and more that this bitch, is more than just a bitch, she's a fucking bitch. no wonder, in the novel, the king went mad, she made him that way
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Sleepless Bonk - 1725748142
sorry Hamel, I don't like shipping cute but dumb MC or strong beautiful MC with men who use puppy eyes, I don't mind it if they're used in a comedic way, but if it's use to manipulate the other person's feeling, kindly fuck off :]
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Sleepless Bonk - 1725747869
sad to see this happened, because even if the wardrobe event didn't happen, I can't see Hamel and red hair relationship to work out, especially when red hair's a bitch
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Sleepless Bonk - 1725747531
with how much she fumbled, I'm surprised to see her events advancing lol, the world must've thought that the other future was shit and opted to make this present work no matter what
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Sleepless Bonk - 1725746308
ah yes the misunderstandings have come
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Sleepless Bonk - 1725745980
honestly, Hamel should've seen that coming, even after seeing the future he couldn't get a good love story, hope he takes his feeling in positive and instead help ginger
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Sleepless Bonk - 1725745313
lmao, ginger can never come up with a foolproof plan and a backup plan in case thinks go awry
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