me want to wed cute loli too

wait that is not it

Honestly the choice of drawing something else other than the red dragon is pretty good. If another family has the red dragon, the value and fame of it go down. A mythical beast on the same level would be more interesting.

Also is the girl a sex slave? Kek. Because normally it feels weird that he would grab her by the face like that if she is just a guard slave. I know it is probably just that but I guess he can see her appeal clear enough. Sex plz, I changed my mind, how about sex. Wait, how about I kill myself, tf am I thinking. Eww. I am loyal to the MC only, MC is best girl. The thought of other women suddenly feel so filthy. Rightfully so, I suppose. 

Also the bullshit with the little girl being sidelined is annoying. I was hoping for her to be a valued member of the house, but I guess the author doesn't allow bad guys to have any good trait whatsoever. I saw that many times, I hate it. The noble guy would actually be a fun guy with his mustache if he was a good guy. Mustache is nice you see. This suck, this story is all one note like a fucking fairytale. You might as well make Tougo a girl and have her marry Fei and end it with a happy forever after, if you like fairy tale so much. I can't think how that wouldn't be nice. Seriously, who is this knight woman even? Ex-lover of Laocules? Then we should have more info about her, more backstory about her, instead of explaining it in a mucho texto chapter that I couldn't care less about. If the entire family is treated as bad now then just take the little girl out and douse fire on the entire house. So annoying, making stupid long ass fairy tale with evil characters who has no positive trait beside his mustache only to show off your righteousness outta nowhere that I don't think I need to see, how about you stop.

Chapter too much texto. But apparently this knight girl here is not a hostage but just a personal guard for the evil lord's daughter, is that the case? Don't tell me it is the one where she knew the lord is evil but doesn't want to leave his daughter in band with them so she volunteer to stay. Or she is just obvious to the lord's plan and only take care of his daughter.

Cute enough
I mean MC ofc, not the old lady

That speak to the trap quality

Shinzo Abe nooooo!!!!!!!!!

Why would they kill sexy slime girl. I guess they haven't seen her true sexy form yet.

Also from the talk, I guess this one fall into the "non-negotiable" category. Since our MC shows no sign of trying for any negotiation at all. Wonder if this tribe even has intelligence or they exist more like elements. But sexy slime girl teaser, I bet it is suddenly negotiable somehow. Need slime girl for my dick.

errr...

nice handicraft?

I called off on this chapter for 3 weeks. It went well at first, but then I realized I was right. The plan fell apart huh. That was a terrible end no matter how you try to sway it.

I checked because I saw an anime announcement for it, but apparently this shit has nothing. Meh. I know I might be criticizing it a bit but the truth is that there is nothing else from this short ass story. Meaningless guy who I guess was meant to be the MC but he has nothing going for him, I guess Kubo meant to give him some powah after he showcased the girls with their funni magics, but that was too late because there is no season 2 for this 5 chapter manga. It should have stayed as an one-shot since now it feels more like two-shot, the 1 to 4 chapter can just be a continued oneshot by themselves honestly. Why bother with trying to continue it if you are just gonna abandon it again anyway, Kubo-san?

THe fuck

So in the end he did absolutely nothing. 

So errr

where is that season 2 you were speaking about

Her head popped back in. 

How did he talk with just his head?

she got a cross for her head. Super christian.

fueeee, family power...

uheeee, family power...

A very cute power of friendship moment. I always cringe at that. But as they said "You were more happy when you were cringe". I guess it is nice.

Plan: Torture the protagonist until he become the ending of the world itself. And I will have the last laugh. 

Damn. I saw this kind of plot multiple times but this is the first time I actually see the villain succeeded. And the protagonist will cramp like a worm in his pile of corpses. F.

he become worm 
epic

drama bad, end plz