I was just about to comment on it aswell. The art is definitely a lot smoother. It looks great!

thank god

They explained it as him not actually writing these parts of the story, his story was super bland with nothing much to it, and the system or whatever is spicing things up. i think

Well some at least have useful abilities or help out, this guy can’t seem to be able to do either

Facts

The troubles of baking

Oooh that could happen, would be kind of weird though

Nice

What a dick move

Been there my guy

I don’t like this guy man. But hey, i guess he’s redeemable if he backs off when she says she’s in a relationship.

Yeah, no. That’s gross man, she has a boyfriend

Well she’s gained quite a but of confidence since the first chalter so I have no doubt that anything remotely bad’ll happen here.

Been there.

oh fs, but it's just lazy writing

yeah it feels like the second bit but we’ll see

lmao

PLOT ARMOUR. LITERALLY

this seems to be turning out the same way with an incredibly dense mc who has no sense of normality despite liking normal things. idk its kinda weird

thats what i think