This chapter had me teary eyed at the end. 

I was wondering if bahomet would ever get horny

This could have been good if it hadn't sucked. 4/10

I gotta admit I feel like he's the one with time powers probably 

That blush in the last panel. Very nice. 

Perfection. 

Beautiful

I know whats happening here
https://i.postimg.cc/brrBYy2f/i.gif

Fake beads. A nice touch lol

I almost feel bad for that girl 

WHAAAAT
Shes the one who made the guys clone??

She let him focus on his goals instead of trying to hold him back. I don't think that's really a "bitch move." 

The girl he was talking to earlier and brought into the dungeon was the girl he tutored for a while close to the beginning I believe. 
Unless you are guessing the impersonator? 

Kind of weak. Failed to really immerse me in the slice-of-life because it kept focused on the drama and ocasionally something supernatural. 

But it also failed to pay off the supernatural by not having it do anything particularly poignant or significant. 

And the drama doesn't feel like it paid off either cause the story was about the characters so the drama was never meant to be the focus. 

Just kind of a weird balance between a few themes that all have potential but fail to live up to it. 6/10 

Maybe try the anime? Probably looks beautiful to have a beach front aquarium in full color animation. 

Idk man I feel like she could have been in the movie even if she didn't want to keep being an idol. If nothing else it would be an experience. Plus she might get a decent contract which would be nice. 

This chapter was definitely cute

Another new form to play with

I know 98% of people reading this expect and probably want them to end up together, but honestly I think they'd make great siblings and I kind of want them to stay that way. 

It isn't whether she has feeling for him or not, its whether he has feelings for someone. He's always got an air of solitude around him. Always just close enough to touch but never close enough to hold on to, to put it one way. 

Next time he should put it in a sock