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Yane Satsuki
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bro actual think bring up some ramdom ass other series mistake istead of pointing out what's good in this series (which is none existent) is a way to save his ass lmao . i better talk to a wall than this AI slop reply hahahaha
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bruh this guy smell like using AI to reply cmt hahahaha , never can bring up the defend point to talk and keep writing irrelevant nonense shit lmao ~
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every cmt i already giving out the problem i want to talk and you always reply with rambling something else that not focus to what i talking about .
you like the series sure ~ and you want protect what you like sure , but ignore the fact the series have plot hole because you like it is a ignorance of act ~ there's no point in discuss if a person just blind can't differentiate what's good & what's bad in first place is just wasted of time .

p/s : and in case you don't know the rewriter need call the original source if they want to change story that not product 1:1 from the original , it's a necessary procedures for everything so it not a neccecsary come from respect purpose you understand ? so stop delusional makeup story by yor self .
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Yane Satsuki Schwarz - 1759542526
Welcome to the bonfire, Unkindled One.
I am a Fire Keeper.
I tend to the flame, and tend to thee.
The Lords have left their thrones, and must be deliver'd to them.
To this end, I am at thy side. https://i.postimg.cc/GhggxYfR/i.jpg
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the script for manga are writing by the novel author them self => Shisui Meikyou
but the anime get rewrited by Hiroshi onogi for the script then you well know how sloppy writing the original is .
you "liked" it doesn't equal with it's are "well written" .
i mention SAO writing pattern , you is the one misunderstanding something in here , i talk about the writing skill when you ask what "plot hole" and you starting point somewhere else or maybe you don't even understand what're you reading at all ~
and again you enjoy the series doesn't mean other will ~> and it also doesn't equal as the story doesn't have bad written part in it .
seem like you just want defend what you like ~ yes it's natural thing people always do . but you want to accept and see the flaw or not it still up to yourself i guess
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10 arcs of sloppy that the author trying to fixing it with tape that still leave hole leak out water ?
if you don't understand why i mention SAO then you clearly don't understand the similar in writing ( if you think that's a game and this's not a game make it different then laughable enough )
1. what are you even trying to explain and defend here ?
2. again you missed the mark point what i was talking about
3. suprise see new thing are different , in here it clearly describe that he supprise that enemy can block his attack -> whick is sloppy writing that mentally state doesn't match that he's a confident acting as a low profile .

p/s : anime fix what ? yeah ofcourse they're trying to fix this sloppy mid story writing ~ it's J.C.Staff studio after all no way the director are stupid that make 1:1 to the sloppy original
& i also see Bandai face appear in this so they trying to create this into another dead ass mobile game nothing so suprise of ~

p/s 2 : reading better novels instead of this sloppy will open your head ~ like :
- 白の魔王と黒の英雄 ( Shiro no Maou to Kuro no Eiyuu )
- Baccano
- 現代社会で乙女ゲームの悪役令嬢をするのはちょっと大変 ( Gendai Shakai de Otome Game no Akuyaku Reijou wo Suru no wa Chotto Taihen )
- キノの旅 ( Kino no Tabi )
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what follow acconding to the source material have todo with fixing plot hole ? it follow the source material so it's not have flaw from original source material it self ? lol
you know what big flaw hole in this story writing ? the author creating too op army as starter for revenger kind of a story then he realized he created a cap power scaling for the world building are 9999 & UR item - which later on it come back to bite the author with how sloppy that foundation world build has make :
1. hard to pull off a good fight because of that since he already create the mc at max with power creap army
2. starting pulling shit logic from his ass that actually breaking the whole "game setting" world build into dust -> example "soul skill" because i attack your soul so your lv not meaning any shit => whole the system world building just get flushed into toilet .
3. why he so suprise that other can block his skill when well know that he's using low rarelity skill card ? another sloppy character writing logic . ~
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p/s : what the anime has anything to do with the sloppy writing that make plot hole we talking in here ? what you even trying to point at here ?
anyway this avg story just around 5/10 ~ read to pass time at best but when you actual trying to use your brain to think you will see it just another sloppy SAO copycat writing behavor but wrose ~
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Yane Satsuki - 1759512333
the bro actually go every cmt to defend the story plot hole

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Yane Satsuki - 1759355030
more ~
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Yane Satsuki - 1759353217
it's me or pickles slowly look like Moroboshi Kirari from im@s the long running giant girl joke ~

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and let me remind , you aren't using "would make bad" in your first line you say it's "ruined" ~
that 2 phase are totally different thing right there https://i.postimg.cc/NFKPhcmB/i.png
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bro is twisted the conversation with his own oppinion in his big self esteem head again ~ lmao let me remind you below https://i.postimg.cc/gk63fJXX/i.png
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when did i get mad lmao ~ it's normal way i type shit that aren't mad , if you dumb i tell you dumb straight to the face there's no need for ironic word to be used .
what i saying here is not about your opinion that you hate non morral act , it about you apply your self opinion that if the story doesn't follow your standard its get ruined ~ lmao .
like i already said you you probably aren't read so i repeat : you don't like shit sure => but it doesn't equal bad because you don't like it ~ lol
you're typical big self esteem that want erything must follow what you want , nah earth doesn't spin around you lol ~
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how about write your own story ? why you trying apply morral shit into a fiction story with non morral exist from verystart ? are you fking dumb ? "it would be ruined" ruined by what ?
like i already say from begining ~ want morral shit go read "rent a girl friend" os something ,
you're is the one have bias here ~ story not follow your standard => you not like it sure => but it doesn't equal it get ruined ~ the only person get pissed and complain about that shit is you .
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