Lol

There is more sweat in the armpit

Lol

The hero history won't forget

I like it it still salvageable

No sense shit

Lol

This isn't bad. It countain bullism and violence not gore.

Yea you are right. There is rape and psychological violence. I mean that isn't a bad thing in a story but this is no sense violence. If described well even something like that can be good but that doesn't make sense

Yea he is right. I will continue but is exaggerated and irrealistic in everyway

Can I say that even if this is mean etc. The writing is actually good. Do you agree with me?

That's why I don't trust anybody even my family

That chapter was really well done

You can be weak but never a coward

I'm more attracted by the guy than by the girl lol

I think that many girl.would fing him attractive in a way probably

Thnx for saving me

Basecuteball

Cute friends

This is cute