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Longdonut68
682 points
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Longdonut68 - 1742496073
Very nice short and well written. I rate it 8/10.

Kinda would’ve liked some after story and some explanation on the aliens and how he could time travel, the only thing they told us is that he skipped 3 months each cycle and not dying by the earth boom let him keep his memories, pretty sure 1chp is enough for that.

Also, the fact that he skips 3 months is what kept him sane , i imagine having to reexplain everything to everyone around you will mentally fuck you up, atleast now he gets a head start.
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Longdonut68 - 1742364258
I swear if you fold for him in the next chapter im dropping this
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Longdonut68 - 1742173239
I like it. It starts slow but gets interesting later. But then again, I like everything with mc vs gods trope so take that with a grain of salt
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Longdonut68 - 1741827665
This is so fucking good. Absolute peak. Scroll up and read it and don't even think of checking the comments because they are full of spoilers.

Absolute 10/10. I'll look to read the novel now
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Longdonut68 - 1741178778
Defeated lion leaves
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Longdonut68 - 1731494701
Man…. They dragged this for far too long. The last 40 chapters are just about the spear hero and the lot around a campfire remember past memories. Just fight and give me the ending man. Im not saying im not enjoying the art and the side stories but this is taking too much time. Ill drop this now and come back a year or so later
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Longdonut68 - 1730242169
Whoever decided to end the season 1 in the middle of the most important fight that had been hyped for 52 chapters is an idiot. And i really liked this. At least fucking end the fight man. It has been a month and still no update on s2. Im dropping this and coming back a year or two later. This really pissed me off lol
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Longdonut68 Trecta - 1729036906
I mean… can you really rule that out? Just because the author didn’t write it doesn’t mean it didn’t happen
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Longdonut68 - 1728746115
Okay, review time.

This is my third reread. Its so fucking good. Skip chapter 0.
10/10
Its up there next to berserk for me
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Longdonut68 - 1728491724
Pov: your grand child destroys your home
https://i.postimg.cc/xTb5PRz2/i.jpg
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Longdonut68 - 1728491008
They skipped too much of the dungeon. So he learns skills from killing monsters?
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Longdonut68 - 1728490570
We are bringing dungeons into this? Sounds interesting
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Longdonut68 - 1724883309
So im assuming in the original writing he did grape her before she killed him. Otherwise I don’t think she’d show this strong of a reaction upon seeing him
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Longdonut68 - 1724697969
9/10 The story is amazing. Read only until s3. Continue when s4 has ended.

I was blue balled too much and i went to read the translated web novel and it’s readable but it isn’t really written coherently, clearly translated by people who speak english as their second or third language. Don’t get me wrong im not undermining their effort but just keep that in mind.

Other than that the story is far from over. expect a season 5 after the season 4
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