The adventures are not verry sigmahttps://i.postimg.cc/QtHP97Rq/i.png
Im sorry, the brainrot got me for a second

BONES

It has a use >:( they just dont know when

Read it, its quite good. (Simmilar vibes as)
https://mangakatana.com/manga/the-dragon-the-hero-and-the-courier.23918

This is underrated

Love the concept :3

https://i.postimg.cc/CK73rZty/i.gif

He fucked

They have a point tho

Nah, less than 10 comments means no

Im always amazed by people who can speak 2 languages T-T im just proficient in English. I have a failing grade in spanish XD

Your wording could use some work but you are pretty understandable for someone who learned without a class. (I can help you with wording if you want)

I hope you become proficient in it too someday :P

I appreciate wall of text people

https://i.postimg.cc/HLXLRMWJ/i.webp

Ill give a tip here, one grammar mistake in this comment is redundancy (Useless repetition). the first sentence can be shortened to “thx for both, i will try to use them next time”

The other obvious one is the use of them in the second sentence. Them is a pronoun, instead use “it”.

A less obvious one in the second sentence is the last word, “here”. Instead use the word “there”, as here means something where you are, and there can be used to define a place or talk about something in the past tense (things that happened)
The reason i consider this grammatically incorrect is because here would mean the mistake was in the same comment.

Its kinda fun to point out these mistakes and explain them XD just tell me if you dont understand my explanations on certain things

Personally i kinda wanted them to work together XD

HAREM!!!

On this comment there are only 2 spelling mistakes, the second one is negligible (ignorable) just remove the t from enough. The second mistake is using must. Must implies you believe there is ___ for a fact. Instead you should use the word might. Might implies you believe there COULD be ___.

Hope this helps :)

I’ll try my best, for your first comment: Herobrine is a name and so its capitalized. Don’t forget the e at the end, it makes the i sound like eye instead of ih.
This only applies to vowels so the second spelling mistake is guesse. It should be guess instead. Instead of watchet it’s watched, this is because t is a much sharper noise than d. The final spelling mistake is in crypi, it is spelled creepy.

Your grammar is atrocious

I am staying as far from that as i can. I can tell what it is by the front page and the tags. I have no relation to that whatsoever