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Zani
355 points
Level 20
182 Comment(s)
120 Upvote(s)
Zani - 1779553668
thats good magic
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Zani - 1779520601
what
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Zani - 1779519859
A surrealist art study. Appreciate the journey.
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Zani - 1779482225
I'm SO GLAD the clothes got an upgrade.
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Zani Duchly - 1779482136
I'm not saying its not logical. Just that its not enough for me.

Since the beginning I think this one went a bit too far on the smartass MC vs dumb world. Like his father signing a blank document, or a swordmaster conveniently showing out of NOWHERE to be his master and the MC literally being good at EVERYTHING.

But its nice you can enjoy the story, go for it. I personally love the art. :)
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Zani Duchly - 1779467433
I'm glad your suspension of disbelief accepted that and you can enjoy the story. To me, it's just bad writting.

What carries this story is really the art.
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Zani - 1779466606
koinzell is useless in the sequel!
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Zani - 1779422787
Wow, she sure received a boost!
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Zani - 1779385543
I'm SO GLAD the clothes got an upgrade.
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Zani DragonLord - 1779332524
only if he can punch the poison out of him haha
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Zani - 1779331755
It would be a great character dev if inojin remained blind, and started to see again controlling other people
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Zani - 1779264123
is there anything he cant do?
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Zani - 1779259222
hes so protected by the plot that even jesus helped him hahahaha
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Zani - 1779214875
Even for stories where the character is a smartass who always comes out on top because the plot conveniently allows it, this one went a bit too far.

But the art is really good. It carries the story.
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Zani - 1779213580
just like that hes a master???
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Zani - 1779169587
I want a bigger story in this ruined world!
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Zani - 1779169283
shes more dangerous than the monster
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Zani - 1779168559
shes a psycho too
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