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Zevenyde
1109 points
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Zevenyde - 1763500551
If all three of them show up at once, that’d be suspicious as hell!
Anyway, I think we can safely say the story is actually progressing!
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Zevenyde - 1763416146
not even a kiss? Did they rush the ending? It's like a "soft axe" bruh
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Zevenyde - 1763412233
didn't expect Okarun to take a stab, plot armor to the rescue! (power up ?)
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Zevenyde - 1763245934
I expected the chancellor to be more respectful… but nope, they’re out here battling for the title of dumbest Clown of the Kingdom!
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Zevenyde - 1763245611

I mean she obviously wants to be the cool girl, I really am rooting for her
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Zevenyde - 1763160048
They really sound like a long-time couple at this point. And that line? “The bed might break”? Who thought that was a good choice of words?!
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Zevenyde - 1763159531
She wins a beauty pageant and suddenly... It's confession time! At this point I expect the next girl to trigger romance by winning Rock-Paper-Scissors. We’re deep in harem territory now.
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Zevenyde - 1763159040
I mean, he is obviously gross enough to be called a stalker lol
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Zevenyde - 1762900507
“I don’t want to be friends with you anymore”… Bro, really? That’s the worst way imaginable to start a confession. How do you even mess it up that badly? You’re confusing her on, like, five different levels!
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Zevenyde - 1762900231
That’s a total losing flag right there. I was really rooting for Asahi, but I guess it’s always the girl on the cover who ends up winning!
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Zevenyde - 1762763722
Axe-kun’s back at it again… but hey, a confession! Those are an endangered species nowadays.
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Zevenyde - 1762698538
So, aside from all the unexpected fantasy twists (which the description totally failed to mention), are we just going to ignore the fact that the dragon’s tail has a hand?

The little guy is literally drinking beer!
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Zevenyde - 1762207860
At this point just give up on the sex scene, it's like seeing 2 black rectangle making love
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Zevenyde - 1762207671
So... I guess this trend of seeing idiots show up and harass a girl is normal? So cliché it's infuriating. Also , this black box is useless
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Zevenyde - 1762207273
So... no one's going to question the fact that there's a mummy with a pharaoh's head riding a bicycle with a katana in his hand? And that he's using his own bandages to make a line so he doesn't fall? I guess we're getting used to anything with this author, lol
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Zevenyde - 1761949594
I... did not expect that (the grand-father of course... yes of course)!
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Zevenyde - 1761425462
dude had no chance to confess, talk about misfortune in love lol
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Zevenyde - 1761342021
Is it one of those stories where in the end the childhood friend lose? At least make her annoying, author...!
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