oh shit... Ty for the point out... Hardly ever read author notes... Feel like ¾ are just asking for money and ⅛ is information that can be observed

for real... Kinda lost heart after seeing backstory just to watch her get capped

They pulled some real Game of Thrones (tv series) shit there

If you are looking at star quality and not recognizing the trap, yes. The biggest reason to why MC fortress was so well off is because they had the ability to recruit outside forces. They looked at potential rather than rarity. A 1star is always able to become a 7star if they are worth it, but a 7 star who does nothing is worthless. In this way they didn't need to waste resources pulling from a limited supply as you can only summon from "your world" pool. Especially starting out you'd have to look at skills (inherent ability) AND skewed skill/level acquisition (potential).

CONCLUSION even 1% character can be trash. MC said himself he'd spend more than 5k to acquire his character

without knowing the fact that these are all real people from worlds that are collapsing yes I would trade. The problem is the world is filled with a limited number of people. Like the broken character that the MC chanced upon, some people have skill that is simply immeasurable until you give them a chance. Some people like Velkist are strong for sure, but without the MC to have sorted out that personality, getting them too early will just cause them to die because they refuse to use teamwork and get better. At times, raising a hero from 1 star will be better than a trashy personality hero picked up starting at 7 star. Like the bandit group that just wanted to kill newbies to assert dominance

i was agreeing this individual chapter was short, but they aren't getting shorter. It's still within the norm

drop kick the thing still impaled in it

honestly its not ballista girls fault, team 3 let an archer through the doorway without a word

i saw that shit too, especially how everyone was acting up before the raid

WHEEZE

Just thinking about all the work I have to do makes me tired
Gnight 😂🤣😂🤣

the comment was more about the enlightenment, but yeah, other than reflecting on the past there isn't muscle recovery. IG mental recovery would be good though

went to read it, but it's not there.
Pacing on setup is incredibly hard to give critique for. Some people enjoy the super descriptive imagery of some stories while others like "hey this is bob, he goes to school" end of introduction.

As for pacing, think of ways to draw out a rise, but not to the point where you lose interest. Then hit a climax to resolve the issues you've set up through the conflicts. Usually they are brief, but not OHKO. Generally speaking, it causes disinterest. It should feel like as you proofread it you want to read faster and faster, until your beath can't keep up with saying it out loud, then you should end it. Your fall should have elements of the next rise but also be written in a calmer expression to leave readers still in the sense of euphoria of accomplishment.

Before you start writing you should brainstorm world rules, character personalities, plot, backstories, and think out the general of why such actions occurred. Really put yourself in each of the characters shoes and make decisions like: Snap with your arrogant self then reply to yourself in a passive aggressive manner. Don't just write a blog, make a world.

This is about all I can give advise for something I can't read... Good Luck

Have you ever run with armor plates or sandbags?
But it is hilarious, I do agree

so I'm just putting this out there...
Unbreakable Spear is better than unbreakable sword. With a spear you can cut like a dagger, swing/sweep with the shaft, stab, and with a flexible pole, can alter stab location mid-thrust. It has the ultimate ability of spatial control.
The only time a sword gains the advantage is if they can close the distance at which spear becomes staff.

Gotchya. If you want to argue superhuman and say a swordsman can project ki and throw it, so can a spearman. It just takes more ki to cover a larger surface. You could say but it's harder to deflect the various vectors that a sword can cross, but its just as hard to block a jab with a sword. As long as the spearman controls space, the sword cannot hit.

Lastly, a spear preforms worse against more enemies. IE why phalanx formation has a weak right side. Hedgehog formation can be impenetrable until someone crushes it by being suicidal since people will die anyways. But hedgehog wouldn't be used by superhumans anyways

I like Aaron, the result satisfied me

Let's be real, Aaron couldn't improve because he didn't listen. Training increases muscles and reflexes, but rest and reflection brings enlightenment and muscle repair.

What game do you know that has the technology to promote evolution instantly allowing you to use magic?
Edit if you find one let me know cuz imma hop on that shit rn

What the heck is with "Don't Move Dark Mark"? Have I missed something?
Is what was asked
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I remember him, what I don't understand is "Don't Move"...?
Is what was asked as clarification
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told him to drink an unknown potion from the game world. Their relationship is amicable with mutual interests where one cooperates with information and the other with synchronization rate. With his real body exposed drinking something unknown it puts him in a lot of danger
Is the reason he said, "don't move"

at this point... It's been cheating the whole time

first who cares if i kill my friends in game character, i can always help them get back up. Its better than the years to spend coming back. I feel this dungeon was created to reflect the realness of NPCs with people

she said if you can win you can also lose, does that mean the multiplier works for wining? Imagine that hack character running around with more levels than cap lol

from what's been shown, he got sucked into a portal in the game and woke up with a new body in the past. Even if constructs are a thing now thanks to the technology of the game, his new body was born at least 10 years prior to the game release (he's in high school or was). He was approached by the military who had the fear of alien life forms invading earth due to a prophecy. This game they actively play in after a certain point has an awakening quest, where it synchronizes your body and in game avatar. Based on the sync rate, they receive that proportion of the games abilities and stats in the real world.