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ThE_0NeThAt_waTcHeS
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ThE_0NeThAt_waTcHeS - 1768115314
what is the issue over the eyes being assymetrical?? its proof that the art is made by a normal human and not AI and adds the artist's own touch to it...
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ThE_0NeThAt_waTcHeS - 1768114928
that ocean art is just the artist flexing and calling it "fudo's art, I did not mean to cook so hard" atp
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nah.... look at the visual treat we got... something tells me that Wakaba only was rejected due to her problem with mking backgrounds and her drawing skills not matching the style she was going for(because all the editor notes for her rejections that we have seen so far do not talk about the story and only talk about the art being bad)

now that the art issue is solved, time to earn 3 million yen!!!
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ThE_0NeThAt_waTcHeS - 1768114208
OK... MC is pretty scary(in a good way) when it comes to art
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ThE_0NeThAt_waTcHeS - 1768113598
so a manga version of ONE and Murata?(only if she has ONE's storytelling skills)
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ThE_0NeThAt_waTcHeS - 1767966345
this was good.... but fair warning... if you have issues about works with r*pe, child ab*se, suicide and the like, please dont read this, it might trigger you
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uhh...... WHAT!? r u on smn?? the brother(I assume u mean the MC) is not a pdf file like the teacher is... and why tf would he 🍇 the girl?????????? there is no motive, there is no reason for that to happen, it will also make the story go in a different direction than the theme(which is guilt and moving on)
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ThE_0NeThAt_waTcHeS - 1767965968
happy ending!! thank goodness!!!! tho It could have gone on a little longer imo... actually, its good that this ended early or else i fear the author would have lost the plot just to increase the chapter count
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ThE_0NeThAt_waTcHeS - 1767965505
Yuri should have told someone about this situation... how did she think that confronting an individual who is abusive and also "kept leering" at her(she said that in chapter 1) was gonna be safe for her???? she trusts her brother right? she should have told him!! pretty foolish of her tbh

Getting stabbed 10 times was clearly not enough punishment for that old bastard... Kazuma should have cut him into pieces(after ripping his finger and toenails, and piercing his nipples with a sharp object and gouging his eyes out) and fed him to the pigs, collecting their poop the next day after they finish digestion, slaughtering the pigs and mixing the poop in and then feeding that to the stray dogs... Then cleaned the leftover skeleton and sold it to some Medical college for some pocket change
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ThE_0NeThAt_waTcHeS - 1767965116
I am speechless...... I bet a huge plot twist is coming(btw, this feels like one of those h-manga stories told from the viewpoint of the victim side... and made to be more realistic and sad to show how bad things get...)
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ThE_0NeThAt_waTcHeS - 1767964832
hmm....... at least they are together
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she did not say that to Shiika... the way the speech bubble is drawn makes it look like she said the "GET OUT!!" as a general statement to everyone in the room for keeping such an important thing from her
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ThE_0NeThAt_waTcHeS - 1767964231
heavy... cant comment anymore because I feel too bad to even make jokes...
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we live in a world where ppl treat some children as devil spawn because of the way they look... what do you think MC, who heard that the girl he feels guilty for saw her dad force himself on his little sister and did nothing about it feels towards her now?? doesnt matter if she was a kid at the time... his copium addled brain will make him think that all that matters is that she WAS there and didnt do anything to save his sister
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ThE_0NeThAt_waTcHeS - 1767963628
thankfully, the father is still the bad guy... and he turned out to be even worse than I thought... he not only 🍇ed a student, but also abused her daughter, and did something to the son which led to him having his self-harm fetish
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ThE_0NeThAt_waTcHeS - 1767963208
now what happened??
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ThE_0NeThAt_waTcHeS - 1767962986
hmm..... this is what I think happened:
the father did "some stuff" to Shuusuke, and the mom found out and divorced him but the damage was done and Shuusuke probably ended up developing a self-harm fetish which "awakened" when he saw his sister for the first time...
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