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ThySoftMouse
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I read it its aight it has a lot of potential.
its world seems decently well built and the lore they seem to have planned for it, however, it teeters on junk food with its wasted potential, so far, I've read up to chp 38 (25 here and then to 38 on other sites).

when the demon comes in so far is the worse although after the demon it goes back to seemingly fine once more, about 3 or so wasted chps of legit almost zero talking and just fancied up looking combat with bright colors for no lore or exchange to be built up at all and not to mention inconsistencies with the fight itself, eg she gets pinned by the demon and then next frame being her blocking an attack with her shield which left me dazed as I thought the site messed up and skipped forward and tbh I'm still not sure.

the lore and world building itself happens more so around the mc then actually from the mc who is more of a lucky savant type, making it a little harder to skim through since you can just miss something randomly dropping solid lore tidbits from a single speech bubble, or placement of things. the mc also has a tendency to sideline themselves and watch or let others get stronger or more experience, which I think is slightly better story wise then simply op late mc who shoulda been there like multiple chapters ago, but the writer is in a dilemma of how to show hardships in the slightest.

if not for my sweet spot too absolute unit characters, especially of the buff kind or heavily armored, I actually mighta dropped it on the spot from the demon fight despite the world and lore potential
I haven't read its novel but from comments i seen on others sites it seems the manhwa ver is really taken its liberates in what its doing
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ThySoftMouse Nobletail - 1760670530
i legit thought they changed the cover image and was super confused who that dude was until i seen it only had 25 chps
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ThySoftMouse - 1759064696
ooooooh i really like the focus more on real snakey now, not that i mind the old style at all
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ThySoftMouse - 1759064285
i love him the boi
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also hhgggg, i want
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ThySoftMouse - 1759063308
i really enjoy his eyes
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ThySoftMouse Aryuuma - 1754671754
they had talked about divination magic somewhere in the first 10 chps and i had always thought that was just preluding to it, after all the ability to have water show whats happening far away being changed to something directly to them, althought since its divination sight itd be like a 24/7 true sight at all times
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ThySoftMouse Arvadiel - 1753501801
man that show is such a chill vibe
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man their eyes are just so good, i love their design so much really makes my heart skip a beat when they do a full stare and i dont mean in a scared way
https://i.postimg.cc/BQxmXFSM/i.jpg
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ThySoftMouse - 1751759148
im so glad the human form gets reverted, they are so much better as a big dragon
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ThySoftMouse - 1751730703
no no nooo why the tease just to go back to the bad ver ;-;
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ThySoftMouse - 1751730101
yesssss creature, its so much better that way
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ThySoftMouse - 1751728998
god damnit it didnt even stay just a little guy for 1 fucking chapter, well atleast its only the bad route and not the worst route i hope it reverts or atleast stays just please dont become a child, but like fr tho why go human when most munhua only ever do the creature route well since they are hard to mess up
this went from alright junk food to mid real quick
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