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Snake Pliscan
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Yeah his current situation of a misfire and a jam is pretty rare not impossible but darn rare , what should have happened is misfire (click) pull the bolt back squib is ejected and bolt locks open ready for a fresh loaded mag to be cycled in . that would take probably 3 more frames to draw in and not everybody would get what just happened with the gun ejecting a unfired round .
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Snake Pliscan - 1777362177
Some interesting character development here , big bully dude has gone straight up full self aware psycho , thats truly wack ! and Mena is about asTsundere as it gets even leaning into the Yandere aspect a bit , will she eventually mellow into a determined unconditional love .... maybe . Our mc , yup just going with the flow fir the most part !
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What would hav been a better origin story IYO ?
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Snake Pliscan - 1777327183
Somethings wrong or somethings different , big difference , whatever it is i'm a bet its gonna cumin handi when bigass bully cums round agian ?
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Snake Pliscan - 1777279289
Welp if you stab them in the eyes its a start , might have to de-cap for a full stop etherway its gonna be messy . Dang !
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Snake Pliscan - 1777278104
Wow is she ever ignorante , like talk about living in an emotional bubble where you are the center of your own universe ! Its sad really but she probly has no clue that the definition of love is respect and admiration .
I wonder if at some point she will have an epiphany and what that will look like , who knows later on she might turn out to be as beautiful on the inside as out .....
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Snake Pliscan - 1777273255
Its more like he has to fend for a person and a half as she has those ridiculous J - cups on deck , lol
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Snake Pliscan - 1777269311
The store owner really intrigues me , something tells me she was / maybe still is hard-core
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Snake Pliscan Dlink - 1777268429
It's under boob so maybe in a later chapter when they all go to a sauna at a porn convention er something
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Snake Pliscan - 1777251307
Okay time ta bring the Ruksachi heat , lol
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Snake Pliscan - 1777250320
Ruki n Sacchi gettin close but Sacchi is now a bit of a wild card .not sure what Sacchi was sayin at the end there
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Snake Pliscan - 1777247700
okay so at this point 11 more chapters ta go , who are we shipping Ruki with ? my guess Sacchi .
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Snake Pliscan - 1777245104
Just keeping all the names strait and whos whos , a little less sloppy art woulda been nice
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Snake Pliscan - 1777243632
Rema-san providing a service for any girls out there that have droughts
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Snake Pliscan - 1777233186
Fabulous art !
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Snake Pliscan - 1777232495
Funny how things work , ya know the old u scratch my back i'll scratch yours , and next thing ya know your livin the dream !
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Snake Pliscan - 1777230917
There's some good stories here some good art too .
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Snake Pliscan - 1777230743
This is a good story at illustrating the idea of why bother being in a relationship that doesn't have reciprocity , it was charming how she was embarrassed to finally receive back what she had been doling out in her search for "the one"
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Snake Pliscan - 1777230090
Pretty safe ta say nipple play is also a bonding agent ! lol
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Snake Pliscan - 1777229505
This is a good age gap story in that you don't know if senpai is just a stop along the way , just one of many experiences the younger girl will have in her life ? It was touching how senpai showed her how a really really good coffee (wink wink) is made .
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