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Db7inthemaking
1054 points
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I never said it didn’t make sense i’m saying that it was unnecessary and ironically it turns the reader off of the story. Her leaving with the guy was like 4 chapters ago so what’s the purpose of showing what we already been told and have been shown previously on multiple occasions? At least then it served a purpose cause she was involved in the ongoings of the chapter and it made her character clear but now it feels like it’s just for the gooners. We get told she’s a hoe constantly and we’ve already seen her be a hoe whenever she interacts with the mc or any male for that matter. We know she’s a hoe, It’s ok. We don’t need to have her hoetivites constantly shoved in our faces cause then that’ll just have an even greater negative effect on how she’s perceived and then it’ll create animosity towards the mc for liking her. Then at that point who wants to read a manga that has a completely unlikable main cast 🤷🏿‍♂️.
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We see her in her natural state every other chapter lol 💀 her inclusion in the beginning was so unnecessary cause it didn’t add anything to the story or her character. We’ve already been told and shown constantly that she’s a hoe so what’s the point of just randomly throwing that in there when she has no involvement currently? We already get it ✋🏿and it kind of felt like the author just put the at the beginning to be like “made you look hehe”.
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That’s fine but it gets to a point where it’s like ok we get it? We already get told and shown every chapter about her hoetivities and as a character she’s been unlikable for awhile so what’s the purpose of just randomly adding her getting fucked in a chapter she has zero involvement in 💀? It’s like there’s a sex requirement for every few chapters. It’s ok to have a few chapters without her being a hoe shoved down our throats.
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The whole idea of the manga is him liking her unconditionally it’s not to make us dislike her. During these last few chapters she has absolutely no involvement in what’s going on currently so them throwing that in was unnecessary cause she didn’t even appear in this chapter lol.
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Db7inthemaking - 1741580529
Why’d they randomly include homegirl having sex at the beginning of the chapter? It’s like the author wants you to hate her on purpose lol.
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Db7inthemaking - 1741578271
Did exactly the opposite of everything she was told 😭
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Db7inthemaking - 1741127886
See what you did? Why pointlessly threaten an org like that without knowing anything about the person you’re threatening. If they want to leave just let them leave, nobody needs people who aren’t committed anyway and if they were a small organization like the way you treated them then even more reason to not be pressed about them leaving.
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Db7inthemaking - 1741043195
Yes, very good hehe. Alright now everybody gather up and beat him with sticks. I don’t want a single bone or ligament intact 🫡.
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Db7inthemaking - 1740595973
Omg she is literally the worst person ever and I’m still can’t believe the mc was gaslit into thinking he’s the problem 🤦🏿‍♂️ but at least he accepted her leaving nice and quick.
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I’d rather them being together as a thruple cause it feels like it’d work well here but if I had to choose I’d pick Amane.
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Db7inthemaking WildGuy - 1740555641
I’m a wet blanket cause I don’t wanna be harassed by freaky frogs? and them “playing around” is obsessively making fun of and competing with homeboy cause they can’t talk about their feelings like normal people. That is toxic, I’m good off that ✋🏿. To each their own ig but I don’t want to be the victim of a few sadistic girls getting there rocks off to bitching me.
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Db7inthemaking WildGuy - 1740554804
He himself is not all there anyway so who cares if HE liked it cause I know damn well if three girls dressed like boys got off on making fun of me you wouldn’t see me enjoying anything. Also them being obsessed with the same boy and getting along doesn’t mean they aren’t toxic lol. Literally the plot is them expressing their feelings in a toxic manner and that’s why I consider them crazy.
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Db7inthemaking WildGuy - 1740553317
No, cause they used to fucking bully me 😭✋🏿and they’re crazy. Never stick your dick in crazy lol.
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Db7inthemaking - 1740540771
Wtf is he doing in the last panel
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Db7inthemaking - 1740532910
She’s literally the best please let her win 🙏🏿
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Db7inthemaking - 1740532525
What’s the point of threatening them to stay and not just letting them leave? It’s stupid to force people into an organization cause that’s just setting yourself up for all sorts of problems.
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Db7inthemaking - 1740508376
Amane is my favorite 🤷🏿‍♂️
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Db7inthemaking - 1740425529
This was a hard read, his craziness is making me cringe. How are you this delusional?
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