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Why not kill Nergui now? It will take time to go around and stop the war. meanwhile you'd leave Nergui to do whatever they want?

Stupid author saying male and females have fundamentally extremely different "souls"

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How can they still be ignoring this super duper suspicious old man that is following and eavesdropping on them?

Just standing there blatantly spying on them and they don't have a clue who it is.

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What is happening here? Why is she pissed?

Not necessarily Bandit A backstory but what kind of poaching it is at least tells us the stakes. Though they did do it a bit with saying the bandits just slaughtered any and every animal they saw. Which seems a bit absurd to me.

Anything that intersects with the main story should at least get some fleshing out. Since big bad poacher group is a point that is of interest with the story, then you got to explain what this pouching is.

You can slide it in as you go. What the law says. What the law is suppose to accomplish/who's behind the law. The black market or motives of the poachers, what they collect/what the collected item is for/t/who it's for/
Just general info,. don't need alot of specifics or examples.

"they are bad people that do bad things!"

I actually dislike that, it dehumanises them, making them just another monster to deal with.

It's not just telling us the specifics, but deciding those specifics yourself so the story has to be a bit more consistent. A author who fleshes out a world for themselves can write a better story in that world, even if they don't share many of those details. As long as they stick to that which they decided so it all connects and weaves together.

Some good points there, thanks. It is frustrating that the world building is lacking that we don't even know.

So one day someone went into the crowded center of town, stripped naked and strapped a chicken beak to their ass. Head down butt up, clucks while moving the beak like its doing the clucking and bobs around like a chicken for hours.

One bystander "Why are they doing that?"

Jack. "They be dumb for love"

Shortly before season 2 starts (ch66 is s2) is a arc that has continued to build up to ch85 currently. The last few chapters they have explained a bunch of stuff through very long flashbacks and the explanations are absolutely terrible. Nothing about this arc makes much if any sense. I am not the only one that feels this way, lots of other comments posting the same and my comment saying I couldn't produce stupider story if I tried has like 30 likes and counting.

This comic's story is heading towards a train wreck. I recommend you don't read this.

Yeah, she even says narrator like that she does not have the mind of a 10 year old, just has some trouble thinking sometimes.

Type of weapon might be a better term than "classification" Like "silver star" etc.

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I wonder what the deal with this is. It looks like ey just parroted what was said.

Well that old man was highly suspicious from the beginning, it's absurd no one suspected em.

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So is that kid upper right corner lying, did the artist screw up or was the translation off or did the author mess up

Glasses ran 5.8, if the competitor ran 6, should have been neck and neck. This art makes the other one look half way to the end, which means 12 seconds, which is apparently a very slow time considering Glasses thought they were 9 and not physically fit. Maybe it's not half way, it can be hard to accurately draw depth, but still not some 0.2 second gap.

Also if Glasses did put on muscle maybe author should have drawn em with more. Sure is covered with clothing but you'd figure the arms and legs would be thicker than that.

My therapist gouged their ears out after.

What is your dirty mind thinking about?

It is usually much harder to disable than kill, especially with such magic. So if in the effort to preserve a enemies life you accidentally kill them, sure you failed to be as strong as you wished but that may happen because you were in combat with theme.

I don't think there is any justification to say the Bard is doing any manipulation, much-less sinister manipulation.

Pervert!

That Mafia business was annoying from beginning to end. None of that stuff was signs of someone being a killer. Maybe I should take this off of follows.

She considered it a game, which makes sense with this nonsensical existence. People from the "real world" were real people and not others. She was ironically killed to silence her, not because of the kill attempt.