Oh my God I can't wait for the same scene where MC saves the helpless girl who only knows healing magic.

It's not like we have seen this scene before in every other garbage isekai.

That luna girl is useless. The whole point of the demon Academy is to train them for war. If she can't kill her opponents and what a hell is she here? Just go back.

Boring right??

God, a blank piece of paper has more personality than the main character.

This is stupid because there was no prior indication of i the main character wanting to have his own fiction, or even wanting to aim for the top of his class.
And now he's trying to kill another one of his classmates because of some goal that he has, and that goal is not even explained. Like what that goal may be or why he has it? I thought the main reason he even came to this world was to survive. So why is he purposely putting himself into situations Which is much more likely to die?

"Fron"??? Really she was called Prone just the previou chapter.

The translation mistakes are so obvious and so many its not even funny. Just damn annoying.

I know right, he's so considerate.

Boring chapter honestly.

I know, right.The author is so kind.He's been explaining everything it is not like he's leaving multiple plot holes already.By not letting us see what the characters are thinking and why they are doing certain actions.

I like how considerate the author is. Truly, he cares about his audience, and this is not just some cheap material that he wrote on when he was high. And never decided to refine and flush the story out before publishing. https://i.postimg.cc/V60PRdXT/i.gif

Yes, but some of the things are not even explained. suppose to make the plot more, you know, understanding for the reader like OK, he took out the snake from inside his body. But what is he doing? Whether is he keeping it in his room? What if that the Duke of their demons can sense? It so he has to keep it on him like Like in his pocket of something and constantly feed it Mana, things like these should be explained for world and character building. But the manhwa is skipping over so much of it.

I am 4 chapter and already disappointed. It's like the manhwa wants to be like another manhwa called a villain wants to live.
But it's just failing, incredibly compare to that, also not explaining shit properly

This manhwa barely explains what the characters are thinking. And why they are taking certain actions.

Huck, throughout this entire chapter, when the patriarch of the demon family meet his Daughter and has a chat with her. We are not even given a proper thought.Process of what he's thinking, and why he's doing something.

Moreover, it feels incredibly rushed, like the author is not really thinking long-term. And he's just going with the flow as the ideas come into his head, which makes it seems like it's really not flushed out at all.

I know right the manhwa is barely explaining anything!!!

Bro wtf

Exactly a fresh idea. I want more like this.
Characters punishing there creators

Hmm i will give this 10 chapter read before i decide weather i want to continue reading or not.

Anyways thx for your review.

WAAAAGGGGG!

Regeneration.

Ah

Nice chapter