The dragon boy is most at fault for things spiraling out of control, he couldn't even be bothered to watch over the guest he had invited, yet he blames MC for looking away when he did the very same thing himself, it was so obvious that woman was plotting something even a kid could predict it.

Wow bro got betrayed by his homies big time, even breaking their third legs wouldn't have been enough.

It ruins the pacing when you just insert backstories whenever in the middle of a fight, not that I particularly care about how the fights play out because they're all ass pulls.

At first she was dumb, but it's really unkind to suspect someone who has been helping you out for a long time, so at this point MC is at fault.

This is how you should write a girlboss, she's not obnoxious and condescending but she will still make things go her way even if she has to be manipulative, of course at her core she should have good intentions for all of her actions.

Bro should just give in, he loves the kids and he's being offered more.

Many fantasy stories explain that Dragons are able to fly with the use of magic, because the physics don't add up otherwise since their wingspan is too short to lift something that large.

Just the ability to move wind means they can make a turbine spin (think of windmills), and once you have that you can generate electricity for simple light sources. A bit sad MC hasn't thought of this, light sources are very important if you want to encourage anyone to study during evening hours.

It said 216 years, so at most she's only about 100 years older than him.

You read porn on this site, don't try to highroad me.

And disproving you on my part would require delving into deeper spoilers which you're not worth at the expense of a new reader. Clichés are not inherently bad, you can argue with any chatbot to confirm this. And if this story is so generic, then you're in luck. Chapter 29 finished the first act, so why don't you give it a read a disprove it to me? Give me an example of another story with the same generic plot development?

Words are harder to back up when effort is required.

Now we have double whammy on the dishonesty. Both on the trash calling and lack of tolerance on different opinions.

Here's a spoiler for you: The MC is not the MC.
And now you even go from calling it cliche to trash, never before a more disingenuous person.

Completely clueless.

Where's the rest of it? :c

Hear me out.

Leon my boy, you got it all twisted. All of those things would demotivate me from working out.

I do want a modern story that isn't just another school lovecom or an iteration of that... and after writing that I realized the synopsis said "transferring schools".

God dammit, you'd think this would have been about a young working adult.

I'm guessing the TL has beef with the Rental GF manga? I'm not sure, I detected the cuck energy from chapter 1 and decided to trash it. ✌

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I like the previous gang, but it doesn't make sense that none of them has joined another static yet, it has been several weeks after all.