for a 1st time making a romance fantasy story, its great, but as the other commenter said, its rushed and its leave a lot of story unfinished making it like an axed story......
but ignoring the ending, its pretty good for 1st time making romance fantasy story
7/10, if there's a future where this story is continued, i would read it

hoooooo boi just segs already!!

okay Lloyd All the way, no need for reverse harem we only need him

i like the artstyle it remind me of "I Raised A Black Dragon" yet its not from the same author/artist
https://mangakatana.com/manga/i-raised-a-black-dragon.26076

NOOOOOOOO I BINGED TOO FAST

idk im just guessing, its like i feel it in the force lol

here comes the part where the story gonna make us hate Lloyd i guess............ i hope its not

NOOOOoOOOOOOOooOOOoooo!!!!
welp, time to wait for months for new chapter

tbh when im reading it i almost take back what i said in previous chapter, but i guess its for her own health?????????????????
still a better ML than the other 2 tho lol

i've seen worse miscommunication, at least this one is resolved pretty quick

okay........... wtf?

tbh i kinda forgot this manwha exist until i read it again and sudendly i remember all of it, just kiss already :V

tbh i like him more than the other 2

Every Streamer/Content Creator ever

https://i.postimg.cc/MZQrr1mb/i.png

a lot of manhwa story like that, and it pisses me off too, where the mc is like "oh its not my story but i dont want to die so i'll try changing the story while also not changing it" like, bro made up your mind

eh.......... okay at least a happy ending, i like the start but from middle to the end its like a mess and dont forget about the flashback after flashback and fillers few chapters before the end and it make a lot of people stop reading
overall 6/10, it feels like author doesnt know where the story is going and decided to ended it before it becare more messy, but it still an enjoyable story

bruh the pope make the demons look like a good people lol

voice in your head : "come on, i know you want to see the spoiler tag...... dont you want to know what knowledge behind those gray bar......"

i totally forgot who tf is that man, nice backstory, but have we ever seen him?
maybe i forgot because i read too much fantasy manwha

too late already read it, my intrusive thoughts win
i think i also got spoiler about who died, but idk if its this arc