that's what I'm saying..how'd his personality change immediately..?

I FUCKING LOVE DUMB WRITING WOOOO

Sucks that most manwha have shit writing. This is so dumb

They know the mc is overpowered so they do this to build fake suspense lol. That’s what happens when you make your mc too powerful in the beginning, you gotta do boring shit like this

Bro is an attention whore apparently

are you dumb

i can't be the only one that thinks of that stupid fucking blackbeard meme every time someone in this manwha writes with a quill lmao

am i the only one that thinks he looks like ban sometimes. ban from the seven deadly sins lol

after scrolling I see that i'm not the only one that sees that this artist is a lil sus lmao. giving kids hips like that

seriously bro why're they built like that lmao. why does the little girl have hips

also the smug girl reminds me of tess

why did the artist make these kids built like that..like..those are literal children right..why are the girls built like that

god this manwha is so ass. Imma drop it now, authors don't know how to write good suspense or badass moments. it just turns into manwha slop so fast

she is being a damsel in distress though..she wouldnt have gotten caught in the first place if she listened to her uncle..literally terrible writing at its finest. they did this in the cheapest way possible lmao. there is no character progression just cheap moments like this

god the writing in this manwha is so BAD lmao. like the author has no idea how to create tension or suspense without making his characters dumb.

dear god..that was so cringe. this author has no idea how to write good moments. this was such a cheap realization moment because he was literally hyping her up and telling her she was going to be strong just so he can treat her like that. Like he already knew this information and then he decided to change his mind suddenly and had to be reminded of it..god its so cringe man. I hate bad writing and this manwha is plagued with a lot of it but I tried to turn my brain off because I needed filler manwha while I wait for peak. But god man everyone has a limit to how much they can endure lmao

thats what im saying. like bro you know baron can easily kill you..right?

seriously, it was making me cringe

Am i just doomed to run into this shit when reading manwha. why do they always change the translations mid story. keep it one way bro. It's irritating to have to get used to different names

seriously I was like..lmao ..is bro going to struggle at all..?