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Bagel-sama
38 points
291 Comment(s)
123 Upvote(s)
Bagel-sama - 1737864150
ngl,this author sucks at writing manwha. Like..I'm probably going to drop this bc it just feels like they just vomit words on a page instead of showing. If you dont know how to show and not tell youve already failed as a manga/manwha author
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Bagel-sama - 1737862631
info dumping is bad writing bro.
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Bagel-sama Labrys - 1737862575
seriously. way to turn off your readers. its giving me brainrot
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Bagel-sama - 1737670647
I went back to read this part again. I think this manwha is good at portraying despair
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Bagel-sama - 1737599885
this manwha has to decide if it wants to be serious or not bro i cant be cryin in the club rn
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Bagel-sama - 1737598078
I JUST REALIZED WHY LLOYD MAKES THOSE FACES!! I'm probably late as shit in realizing it but he literally makes those faces because of his best friend in the previous world..man..I love this manwha
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Asians have a thing for abusive women lol
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Bagel-sama - 1737521473
i forgot lloyd was ripped for some reason
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Bagel-sama - 1737507193
LMAOOO..like son..like..father..? The roles reversed
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Bagel-sama - 1737505562
WHAT IS EVEN HAPPENING ANYMORE AND WHY IS IT PEAK
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Bagel-sama - 1737500723
I FUCKING LOVE THIS MANWHA
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Bagel-sama - 1737500469
why is this manwha so peak bro. other manwha authors need to take notes bc thats how you write COMEDY
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Bagel-sama - 1737429123
YOOO ALL THE DUDES ASKING FOR WOMEN BROO YALL ARE EATING GOOD RN
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Bagel-sama - 1737425641
god i love this manwha man.
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Bagel-sama - 1737424717
LMAOO THE PREVIOUS CHAPTER LITERALLY HAD EVERYONE COMPLAINING ABOUT THE LACK OF GIRLS (ALSO i bet theyre going to assume xavier is Lloyd again) They arent wrong tho, his face is pretty plain
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yeah its not realistic at all lol
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Bagel-sama Terrin - 1737337663
it was mentioned earlier that people told him that he shouldve become a professional fighter

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